Comments : Broken

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    That was sad, but very beutiful. i loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Once again loads of things in this poem that i and many ohters can relate to. ur heart and soul come thourgh all of your words. top notch poet =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Im speechless once again!..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    So sad and yet it brought a smile to my face. Why do you ask? Because I have experienced that same thing and you put it in such beautiful words. Soul, mind, heart were all connected in that one. Great write

    -Dan