by 4 track demo
Goddamn, i can't remember the last time i was thrown to the ground and stomped on by a poem, it is impossible for any one to "feel" the same on the inside as someone else, but to say that i can empathize with your spectacular piece would be the largest understatement i can imagine...words?...this brought my to tears, and my hands are shaking right now...the descriptions you used so vidid and raw, and the emotion and passion in this were so over the top that i truly can't concentrate enough to find the vocabulary fitting enough to compliment this piece enough, in my favorites...thanks for commenting on one of mine or i would have never read this brilliantly written, tear-puller.. |