Test of time..

by brokenmirror   Jun 15, 2008


Intoxicated lies and a torn heart
I was growing rather use to this feeling
Of endless tears streaming down my cheeks
The pitiful attempts at reconciliation

Waking every day to the recurring nightmare
The once proud images of us now gathered dust in their ornate frames
Memories of you, of us, died
Marred by your lies and engulfed in the conflagration of our deceased love

The memories are contained in this husk of a former person
Lied to and cheated

The clock on the wall reverberates in accordance to a silent chime
If only our ardor could have stood the test of time

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Althought the pictures are wonderfull t see
    it was a little strange for me

    you have good expression and metaphores
    but for me the ryhming thing i adores

    i hope you work on it i trust in you
    and fix the lenght of paragraphs too

    it is a good one you have "done" i quote
    and for sure you deserve my vote:)

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    The ending to this poem was reallly nice.
    i like the expressions you used and the flow was nice :)

    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Your words flowed perfectly to express the way I feel also
    you know what I mean
    this line stood out for me
    "Marred by your lies and engulfed in the conflagration of our deceased love"

    Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Rinji

    I really like that reading it I saw like the whole story in my head that's REALLY GOOD! It had a sorta zing to it the ending really closed it out nice too XD

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