Friday the 13th

by Rinji   Jun 15, 2008


This day started with a test or two
It was basic and true
It was all calm and peaceful
Nice and relaxed,
But that feeling passed

We go to a concert
To hear a few rhymes
Everything seemed to be fine
We hang with a few friends
Some young some old
Some with secrets untold

We walk up and down explore the streets
You won't Imagen the creeps
So there we stood
In front of the place
We thought it was safe

Then the words
Went through though the crowd
All our faces looked Wowed
It was their was gonna be a drive by
none of us knew why
The street did empty
Lo's and let's hid
From something they forbid

So we all ran to the grave site behind
It seemed like no one mind
Just to avoid the shots
That were to be shot
Something no one had forgot

The bloods walked the streets
Their ruby's at hand
That's when we knew
That it may be true
One b***h had no clue

She had talked all her shit
And made us unsafe
In this beloved place

We stood far away
No shots were heard
We thought it was absurd
The the cops showed up
Ambulance entail
Did they not fail?

Someone was hit
By how and why
Could they have been chased -sigh-
So that was my day
Hiding all along
I knew this day would go wrong

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  • 16 years ago

    by LIGURE

    Wow.. nice... like this one... good work!! =o

  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    I like how different you made this poem. Your rhymes were consistent but weren't always needed, which is not bad, because I thought your ending worked very well with your theme. Overall I would say you did pretty good with this piece. Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by forevertobeart

    Haha, this was great. it was not only a poem but like a really good story. and i liked the topic too. my eyes were glued to the screen till the end, i swear it. :) nice read.

  • 16 years ago

    by yblehs

    Nice poem its very different
    i doubt you will find another like
    it although the rhyming was a bit forced
    but otherwise HIGHFIVE =]

  • 16 years ago

    by HumanAngel

    Cleverly written.

    It's a unique poem - I liked it