If you really cared

by yblehs   Jun 16, 2008


If you really cared about me
You would be right by my side
But instead you are gone
No where to be found

If you ever even cared for me
You would return my phone calls
But instead you ignore them
And leave me with a passion of wonder

If I ever stayed on your mind
Like you claim I used to do
You deffinately don't show it anymore
But you still conquer my thoughts

If you ever gave a damn about me
Which I highly doubt you did
After a while you forgot to show it
And moved on with the wind.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "You deffinately don't show it anymore
    But you still conquer my thoughts"
    -Spell check definately.

    Overall, a wonderful message. I could tell you were really angry at the one person because you feel like they don't even care one bit about you. But, if they did.. you would expect the things from them that you listed in this poem. Overall, a emotionally filled poem that I could truely see where you were coming from. 5/5. Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    I'm sure that alot of people, including myself, can relate to this poem. It was really good and I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up, girly!!

    ~Kail :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Even though the theme is very personal I am sure it us general enough that most of us can relate. I feel it is common to expect to be treated at least as well as a stranger by someone we care so deeply about

    Ienjoyed reading this and I am going to read the next
    well done

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