Even though the theme is very personal I am sure it us general enough that most of us can relate. I feel it is common to expect to be treated at least as well as a stranger by someone we care so deeply about

Ienjoyed reading this and I am going to read the next
well done

I'm sure that alot of people, including myself, can relate to this poem. It was really good and I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up, girly!!

~Kail :)

"You deffinately don't show it anymore
But you still conquer my thoughts"
-Spell check definately.

Overall, a wonderful message. I could tell you were really angry at the one person because you feel like they don't even care one bit about you. But, if they did.. you would expect the things from them that you listed in this poem. Overall, a emotionally filled poem that I could truely see where you were coming from. 5/5. Nice work.