Leftovers

by yblehs   Jun 16, 2008


After we have come to an end
There is still unfinished business to attend

What will we become in the future?
Friends or the feeling like after the suture

Will you even care after all is done?
Or will you act like you weren't stunned?

Will there ever be a feeling of regret?
I don't know if I can deal with being second yet.

Will you forget about everything we went through?
Or will your critique deny the review?

I bet all you do is ignore all I say
But I know you'll want me back one day!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    In a way it can be somewhat thought provoking. I like how short and quick your poems are to read It doesn't it anyway feel like a chore when I'm done reading them, and many times there are variable meanings I can get out of reading your poems. Once again, nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow. I love this pome and how all these feelings that you want to know the answers to all just came together. I feel like I was reading a poem that came from your heart. Very amazing poem filled with emotions and many thoughts and questions. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rinji

    I think this poem is very good and seems to be very honest like the emotion behind it isn't fake not at all XD

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Sadly I can relate to the feelings of being left over somthing or someting else and you poem is very expressive and well written

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