by LadzOfSoul Jun 16, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I can still remember the love we shared |
by Blueleo
Very nice poem. It's so hard to let go and it seems that the heart never heals, but instead loses a piece and becomes a bit less carring. I think that gave the perfect image of how it happens. |
by Ash
Amazing poem! Simplicity truly shown beneath these lines and yet the fragileness of our hearts continue to cause only ruptures and pain. |
by Mister 47
I think it is a very good , one ,but it need more rhyming !! but i love the expression though! |