This is a really good poem i can feel the emotion! i liked the part towards the end that said
"Dreams Dissolved like paper in fire."
i like that it just flows with it right! good job! 5/5

I like so love this poem dude!! LOL srry i'm crazy!! =)

I like your poem, my heart has been through the same trust me...some one is healing it but im scared there going to mess it up so dont have your hopes up ever trusts me i know....nice poem though....
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