What Hurts

by RavishingEruption   Jun 16, 2008


Trusting you and believing you?
That hurts
Giving everything I was and am to you?
That hurts too

Loving you with all I have and you not loving me back?
That hurts the most
Because I trusted you.
And cared

Wanting you to change your mind?
Hurts down to the core
Feeling neglected and used?
It doesn't hurt so much as make me sick

Thinking of you?
It still makes me cry
Missing you?
I do it everyday

If I had anything else to give you
I'd give it.
If you'd just love me like I want you to
But you won't.

And THAT'S what hurts

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  • 16 years ago

    by PRiNCESS SKiTTLEZ

    =[ sAd PoEm BuT wRiTtEn VeRy NiCeLy ..

  • 16 years ago

    by Lulu

    Its a very good poem and i can relate to

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I'm so sorry for the pain u feel inside...
    The part that I liked a lot in ur poem is

    If I had anything else to give you
    I'd give it.
    If you'd just love me like I want you to
    But you won't.

    And THAT'S what hurts

    It touched me really because some people don't appreciate what others do and sacrifice for them...U know they are the real losers..
    Good job,plz keep it up:)

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    What hurt the most, than being so close, watching you walk away... by the Flatts. I liked this poem, interesting and grandure.
    Nice write from Poetry Knight

  • 16 years ago

    by MJ

    Wow, this poems describes exactly how I feel and it's also helped me alot with understanding my own thoughts. I'm sorry you're going through a rough time, but keep up the good poem writing!

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