I know a lot of people, tara, including me...who feel this way. the poem itself is lovely. i'm so sorry you're hurting, hon. I love you lots.

Wow, this poems describes exactly how I feel and it's also helped me alot with understanding my own thoughts. I'm sorry you're going through a rough time, but keep up the good poem writing!

What hurt the most, than being so close, watching you walk away... by the Flatts. I liked this poem, interesting and grandure.
Nice write from Poetry Knight

I'm so sorry for the pain u feel inside...
The part that I liked a lot in ur poem is

If I had anything else to give you
I'd give it.
If you'd just love me like I want you to
But you won't.

And THAT'S what hurts

It touched me really because some people don't appreciate what others do and sacrifice for them...U know they are the real losers..
Good job,plz keep it up:)

Its a very good poem and i can relate to

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