Sea of Blue

by Unrequited   Jun 16, 2008


Blue waves extend their arms
to you, to me
cradling our thoughts
into a blended, blessed heart.

we live on,
consumed by cherished light
that streams the universe-
and we know we are loved.

in a sea of blue,
I will hold your hand
as our ray of light
penetrates the sky.

***Written, because blue is the longest wave of light. And yet, my love for another extends far beyond any stream of blue created.***

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mason

    Not my favorite of your poems, but still very good nonetheless, i liked the little explanation at the end. it adds depth that i didnt realize strait off.

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Oh. Wow. I love how at the end you describe what you base the poem off of. I found that pretty unique. The poem was pretty good... I liked it, but it could use some work. The vocabulary you use, it great..However.. It definatly could be longer, the length is pretty short and you keep the readers attention.. but I feel like I need to read more! More! More! More! Keep it up, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    I love your last stanza. It made me, as the reader, feel comforted and secure. That is a blessed gift in poetry which you have utilized well.

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