I love your last stanza. It made me, as the reader, feel comforted and secure. That is a blessed gift in poetry which you have utilized well.

Oh. Wow. I love how at the end you describe what you base the poem off of. I found that pretty unique. The poem was pretty good... I liked it, but it could use some work. The vocabulary you use, it great..However.. It definatly could be longer, the length is pretty short and you keep the readers attention.. but I feel like I need to read more! More! More! More! Keep it up, 5/5.

Not my favorite of your poems, but still very good nonetheless, i liked the little explanation at the end. it adds depth that i didnt realize strait off.