"I stopped and stared at the sky so gray.
Everyone's telling me it's gonna be okay."
-You said stopped, and stared.. then you said.. telling. You changed the tense. Shouldn't it be.. "Everyone told me everything was going to be okay." Or even something shorter than that.

"What if I lose myself and am led astray?
What if I'm forgotten in a mist of dismay?
Every thought of mine screams disarray
and the root of insanity I can't convey."
-Wow. I love those words. Astray, dismay, disarray, convey.. and they all rhyme amazingly!

This was a really good poem. You really put your emotions out there. Which was great to see. :] Great work, 5/5 -Excellent.