by Jim McMillen the man within Jun 16, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
THE BATTLES OF LIFE |
by Lyn
I wanted to write a comment on this 'pouring out' of yourself but cannot seem to find the right words. Even though 'she knew I had died' you must have found new life and faith because I have read some of your other poems. It is good to remember where we have come from on our journey through life. Thank you for sharing this. |
Jim that was a gut wrenching read written from the depths of your soul,beautiful my man,i see it was written almost twenty years ago i would love to hear the conclusion of this story sometime.Very well done. |
by JD
SHE DIDN'T WANT TO LEAVE, |