SMILE

by H E Losey   Jun 16, 2008


Sunshine's rainbow
Magic in its giving
Imaged for all to see
Lips expressing love
Eagerly caught by all

Published 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Hey, I thought this was great, very unique, I haven't read many poems on this subject.
    I think it is good the way it is, not to short or anything. Sometimes you can express everything you want to say in few words, and it is still a wonderful piece. Nice work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by msluckyone

    Being more specific would help the image :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is quite good so far, however.. I would expect more from you with such a title as "Smile." I think you could expand on this much more. Good start though 5/5

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