I like this piece, though your flow is off a bit in places, removing an "and" here and there would help. Some good description and thought behind it in all. good job.

I loved this, it is something real and it was amazing just to read it!!
5/5

The poem is very well written and the subject is something I am sure a lot of people can relate to.

take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Ooo i like this poem..its hella good..but me i say one more time and its it but i still do it..anyway..great poem..and keep up the good work..5/5

Heh the person above me has the same name.

Anyway I really enjoyed reading this. i can really relate and it shows both sides of the fence. =) Please keep it up and I will keep reading.

It is so deep u can really feel it
the flow was amazing

keep it up

~gIrL~

This is an amazing poem.
Simply beautiful.
5/5