I liked how there were so many emotions in this that changed rather abruptly, yet did not ruin the poem. At the beginning the image created was so beautiful, wonderful, like a fairytale: |
by Empathy
To me this poem's atmosphere is very unique... I could never really predict anything that was going to happen while reading it which was nice, because it kept intrigued enough to keep reading and I never had a moment where I lost interest. Your use of imagery is very descriptive making this a very enjoyable read. Excellent work! |
Really good poem, i liked how if flowed, it definatly made you wonder what was going to happen next 5/5 |
Very beautifully deep poem that describes well falling inti the romantic abyss some see as love |
'In a faraway and distant dream |
by BREEawNUHH
I liked this. You really painted a picture in my mind. It's a beautiful poem. |
This poem was wonderously writen and it took us to wherever it was that you were describing. it was riveting since the begining. excellent work. |
by Sora
I love poems that show alot of emotion, and different kinds too, and this poem did it. i loved it keep up the wonderful work =] |
I loved this poem....it had such deep meaning well to me it did...u did wonderfully!! |
Another great write from you. The emotions captured are strong, raw, and genuine. I really appreciate the unique point of view this poem had, and loved the last stanza. The ending line is marvelous. The only thing that threw me off a little was the "Falling" tagged on the end of the fourth stanza. To me, it would be better not attached -- just in it's own line: to be abrupt and powerful; as fits the rest of the poem. Just my opinion though! |
Wow!! Your such an avid writer!!...Good Job its very sad tho but thats how some people perceive this point of view...5/5 |
by Cyber Saiyan
In a faraway and distant dream |
I like this poem it showed alot of great emotion, and your vocabulary was great. |
by The Prince
I think the form could be tidied up a bit, it doesn't appear as a good looking poem on it's own, but then again, words speak more. |