This was amazing. It was so real. It struck a cord with me enough to make me think. If people take the time to read it, it'll remind them, too, that it's a perfect description of life.

5/5

-Briana

This poem had so much truth in it, it's so disheartening. I like poems like this, though. Poems that tell us what problems we have, yet somehow manage to turn those ugly things, like the wars and the violence, into artwork.

There were a few problems here and there with flow and whatnot, but Rikki's comment pretty much sums those up.

Good write. :)

This is so true. we really need to step up and do something about what our world has become.. i just hope that when we all realize this that it's not too late... really good poem, though. :)

I am stepping back, but I end up stepping in dog junk. lol
Nice write from Poetry Knight.

Wow this is a really good poem one of my favs 10/5