Worth it All

by yblehs   Jun 17, 2008


I'm trying to find the words
That compare only to you

It's not quite as simple as it may seem
For you are a definite wonder

As your eyes meet mine at times
I feel unworthy of your gaze

If I ever seem confused
It's because you make me lost for words

Whenever I look tired and at loss of sleep
It's because I spent the night thinking of you

If you catch me looking at you
Don't turn away let the moment last

If you feel the way that I do
Let's start something new

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Third stanza, "as you eyes..." - should be as your.

    Other than that.. No flaws... This was awesome poem in which I feel your emotions. :) Great work, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Nice poem:)
    I thought the ending two lines were a bit weak compared to the rest of the poem. The descriptions were really cute. I could totally relate to this piece. In your fourth and fifth stanza I may not have wrote lost and loss maybe find something else to use in there. Lovely job though
    5/5