A Mistake Made

by yblehs   Jun 17, 2008


You took advantage of her
You're quite a cruel soul
I hope the guilt takes over you
For cheating that way
Call it what you want
But it was wrong

I hope you can't sleep
And your conscience eats at you
And it's all you dream about
A fool like you should've known
Word gets around fast
It was too fast for you

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  • 14 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    A very straight forward piece. I love the succinct intesity and the message you delivered. A mistake made that was that wrong should be thought over and thought over again, Think before you act doesn't go too well with most people. Nice job. =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Tsukuyomi

    This describes most guys >.>

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow! that same thing happend to one of my very best friends. and well he felt really bad! hope he dose to! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I like this, you express your feelings well in this poem. You wrote this so well, so nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Keith

    Short and too the point yet pretty effective, gd job :)

    comment bk..

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