by Alex Jun 17, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
How could I have been so blind |
by Mason
Aww... |
by kathy
Good poem.. Love hurts. love is blind |
by Tears
If you are going to write free verse, you need it to flow, be an easy read. Your poem is very good. It just reads a little choppy. You have talent, just slow it down think flow ; nice and easy:) |
by Rachelle
Aww I love this poem 5/5 |