Blind for him

by Alex   Jun 17, 2008


How could I have been so blind
Blind to see that his anger destroys me slowly
It hurts to the core and is felt for days
Yet it seems the sun sets for me,
For my eyes only.

I know somewhere out there someone sees the beauty
That I find in it every time I see it.
And I see the same beauty in him.
Even if him can't keep it,
I want to give him my heart.

His impatience and my frustration
Co-exist in harmony,
Sometimes there is an unbalance of power,
Disrupting the harmony
That is so hard to keep from being chaotic.

He doesn't know it yet,
But I think I'm falling for him.
How else could you explain why I put up with all the hurt?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mason

    Aww...

    im sorry that you are faling for some1 who is mean to you, i know how you feel though, haha, you just cant help it, huh?

    very nice poem

  • 16 years ago

    by kathy

    Good poem.. Love hurts. love is blind

  • 16 years ago

    by Tears

    If you are going to write free verse, you need it to flow, be an easy read. Your poem is very good. It just reads a little choppy. You have talent, just slow it down think flow ; nice and easy:)
    Good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachelle

    Aww I love this poem 5/5
    Rachelle