Aww I love this poem 5/5
Rachelle

If you are going to write free verse, you need it to flow, be an easy read. Your poem is very good. It just reads a little choppy. You have talent, just slow it down think flow ; nice and easy:)
Good job

Good poem.. Love hurts. love is blind

Aww...

im sorry that you are faling for some1 who is mean to you, i know how you feel though, haha, you just cant help it, huh?

very nice poem