As the wind sings..

by Smiling Angel   Jun 17, 2008


The wind sings to me
Whispering in my ears,
The evening feels lonely
With my eyes moist with tears.

I look upon the trees
Searching for happy dreams,
I gaze upon the mystic sky
And search the starry streams.

Can see the smiles beam
Amidst the clouds so white,
They erase off my pain
I smile in the evening light.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    It is a sweet poem but you used the 8 times and too many filler words. I think if you modified it a little it would make the piece much better. You still did a good job though!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    What a nice poem ,great rhyme and flow. Beautifully written. Very descriptive
    great job

  • 16 years ago

    by adroit

    Ooh.... So pretty... It has such a nice, subtle vibe to it. Great Poem. Honest Luck.

    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsey

    I really like it. The flow was nice and your form and word choices were really good. Very visual. Good job =]

  • 16 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.
    Nature,depicted in beautiful imagery.
    The last stanza says it all-nature provides solace.Keep the good work going.

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