Comments : Its Coming. . .

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This gave me goosebumps. I'm so sorry to hear all the people in your family who have died from cancer. Just remember they are in a better place and don't have to fight the struggle of having cancer. It's not easy, that's for sure. This poem was touching for sure. I hope that someone finds a cure for cancer some day, it's terrible to hear all the people that die from it. I'm sorry again. My sympathy is with you. Great job hun. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    I really hope that this poem is not true. The poem kept taking my breath as i read along and finally came the bombshell. This is a very sad poem, very expressive and very touching. I touched me and keeps making me wonder why cancer ever set foot in this world. Great write though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This a terrible disease and one that has taken too many good lives.
    This is a chilling write because it could happen to any of us!!

    Michael