Comments : The Depressed Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Strong opening stanza it was good. It really drew me in to reading more, like most of your poems do ^.^

    I can really clearly imagine this angel. I loved the title as well. How can an angel be depressed? But she is, and the way you and James put her off was amazing. Different and kudos for that. This was a good poem. Different but in a good way. Such emotion and passion flew through this. Amazing. I loved it. This kind of reminds me of a fallen angel. well the stages of angels before you fall. First you get depressed as a depressed angel then you fall and turn in to a fallen angel. Good job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was pretty deep. Wonderful collaboration though; however. You both did a excellent job with contributing sadness to this poem. It was a nice write. I liked it. 5/5.