You make me scared

by Alex   Jun 17, 2008


You want to know why I pushed you away?
Why I was acting like such a witch?
Why it was that made me say that I did not care that day?
I'm sure you don't want to know why.

I'm in a high, and I know you wont let me fall.
You make me feel so wonderful
But I still ignore your call.
You really want to know why?

You're the first guy that has made me feel that way,
Since me and him have broken up.
And I was and still am afraid to say,
That I might be in love.

You make me scared because I promised I'd never love
Not again, I always end up hurt.
And your such a wonderful friend I didn't want to give it up.
I'm not exactly sure how much I can even trust your words.

You make me feel so safe, and so scared all at the same time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Maddy

    Wow that's great! wonderful flow, and powerful words. i've found myself in that position numerous times and that's exactly how i've felt.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tripp

    I would have to say that this is even better than the other one that I commented on...I thought that this stanza:

    I'm in a high, and I know you wont let me fall.
    You make me feel so wonderful
    But I still ignore your call.
    You really want to know why?

    was the most powerful though. You used a lot of symbolism as well as some great diction.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Whoa, I'm in this exact situation now. Excellent portrayal of emotions! Keep it up.
    5/5

    Love,
    Tina

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