Comments : You make me scared

  • 16 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Whoa, I'm in this exact situation now. Excellent portrayal of emotions! Keep it up.
    5/5

    Love,
    Tina

  • 16 years ago

    by Tripp

    I would have to say that this is even better than the other one that I commented on...I thought that this stanza:

    I'm in a high, and I know you wont let me fall.
    You make me feel so wonderful
    But I still ignore your call.
    You really want to know why?

    was the most powerful though. You used a lot of symbolism as well as some great diction.

  • 16 years ago

    by Maddy

    Wow that's great! wonderful flow, and powerful words. i've found myself in that position numerous times and that's exactly how i've felt.