5/5 i love this it rhymes perfect and it just flows flawlessly! good job keep on writing!

I love the rhyming in your poem. the emotion is so there, but the only thing that you should work on is structure and spelling. you're very good at writting poetry, you just need to look a little more careful on your spelling even if you don't have structure.
like i said your a really great writter, and your poem floats nicely!
Keep writting!!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*