Comments : Worry

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    Babe this was beautifully written. Lots of emotion and the such.

    -Dan
    ILY

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Oh wow...This is awesome...when people are in love,they just think a lot if the other one thinks of them or not..etc
    And I liked that u cared about details like in that stanza

    But then at lunch he'll touch my knee
    My heart will skip a beat
    I can't imagine living without him
    He makes my life complete

    Even in simple actions, u feel like ur heart beats so fast like when he touches ur knee within lunch..
    Love drives us insane but it makes us fly from happiness like nothing else...
    Ur poem is beautifully and simply written...I did enjoy reading it a lot..
    Good job,plz keep it up..