Wow....gash...
such a nice poem,you deeply impressed me with this one,loved it (5/5)
I got one of my poem "when some one leaves for ever" on top ranking list,please read my this poem,and comment and rate it as well....corrections or criticism from your side will be apriciated.
words from your side mean alot to me.
Do rank it,Thanks
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Wow. a very deep poem.
a very passionate piece.
you got your point across very well. it was a beautiful poem indeed.
keep up the nice work!