by Jenny M Jun 17, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Yes |
This is a alright start. I loved how you were actually writing what was really going on in your head. The inner conflict in someone's mind.. XD I have a oem similar to this..about the inner conflict in my mind.. Great job on this.. however, as you continue to write you'll learn new things and expand even more on your topic and use better vocabulary..& such. 5/5. |