by ghosts in bloom Jun 18, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
As I'm staring at the sanded horizon, |
A little fun with your beautiful 21st century Beat Poetry...Oceanic indeed... |
by Blissful
Oh this was just beautiful! You truly took me to another place with your flawless use of words. The way you effortlessly created such a wonderful scene left me breathless. I loved how different and refreshing your words were because it's always enjoyable for me to read something new from the same old same. The flow here was just perfect and everytying had it's place. The title captured my eye from all of your other poems which made me want to read this and I am glad I did. |