Oh this was just beautiful! You truly took me to another place with your flawless use of words. The way you effortlessly created such a wonderful scene left me breathless. I loved how different and refreshing your words were because it's always enjoyable for me to read something new from the same old same. The flow here was just perfect and everytying had it's place. The title captured my eye from all of your other poems which made me want to read this and I am glad I did.

Well done on this piece my dear.
*5/5*

A little fun with your beautiful 21st century Beat Poetry...Oceanic indeed...

As
I'm
With
Anticipation

I
Retracing

If
Memory
The
And
Within
Sky's
I
What
Ifs

Possibillity
A
Change
And
Jagged
Way
One
The
Other

And
Howling
Back-wards
Bringing
Outcomes
On

And
I'm

Anticipation
I

Retracing