Love is to an ocean

by Kaila   Jun 18, 2008


Everlasting shadows spring upon your face like night.
As you whisk me away with a smile into the tickling breeze.
Delicate hands barely caressing my soft, rosy cheeks.
As your warm thumb bends my bottom lip down with passion.

Eyes stare into glimpses of eternity and desire.
Goosebumps take over spreading like a lovely disease.
Hands stroke my neck, as the hairs stand up to attention.
Teeth nibble on ones lips, teasing for pleading want.

Breath quickens, as lungs rise and fall like waves of love.
Crashing like a tidal wave our lips collide like rocks and water.
Breaking into a cool mellow tide, barely grasping the sand.
Eyes stare upon another once more and love is what they see.

Noses inch to touch, giggling and blushing, with this tease.
Who are you dear boy, whom I dream upon day and night.
Whisper your name into the wind and let me hear it and embrace it.
Do you exist out there, lovely one? For I would love to know.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    That was very cute. Nice descriptions. It seemed to flow good.
    Alot of things I could piture form your descriptions

    Good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Mrs6Squarepants

    OMG I Love It..What I Love Most Was Yur Choice Of Words It Really Pulled Me In
    Great Job
    Keep It Up

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved this poem. It shows the readers what love can be like and opens my eyes to the possibilities.
    There is one thing that I think would help the poem a little. Try not to use the word love so often. Try to find other words to take its place.
    Other then that it was a great poem.
    5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Daniel Milano

    Excellent use of words, beautifully written...5/5 hey can you do me a favor and vote honestly on my new poem called picture perfect thanksssss

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    Very well written and very very nice imagery!

    And the emotion was very much implied towards end, FABULOUS!

    But the ending along with the poem was very well put together, so well that I forgot that it didn't rhyme

    Usually with poems that don't rhyme I get bored but not this one ;)

    Great Piece 5/5

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