Young Love

Cute poem, but to me it sounded a little shallow and a bit too much like a country song. I suppose it is sweet, in its own way, and I like how you fit so much into so little words. The thing that really bothered me was that I could feel no emotion seeping through the words. Zero. Nada. Even with a narrative voice, a poem should have some feeling, and not just be a gray monotone that can't care less what the poem is about.

Two sweethearts that fell in love. Young love is simply beautiful. This poem was good. Lots of us have experienced the "young love" feeling at one point in our lives. (: Great poem. 5/5.

Aww, sweetheart, this was beautiful. It's perfect for the summertime, especially, since it has that summer feel to it.

Although you talk of rules been broken and such, there's not really a negative thought in this piece at all. It's wonderful and beautiful. :)

This was a really sweet, beautiful, love poem :) i don't think the flow was that great or anything but it worked.. nice job 5/5

This is a really sweet poem, not as cliche as th title led me to expect, and i love the bit about how all love's perfect. i also like how its not to rambling or long - i prefer it to-the-pont, and this is :)