Comments : Anonymous Girl

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Aw !! Nice one, I think its really great how you described this girl. Well done.

    "only an priceless imagine in our heart she remains"

    I think this would be better as :
    " only a pricless imagination in our hearts she remains"

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Great poem! very well written! :)