Comments : Love At First Sight (part 2)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    A well written poem. Simple and yet easily conveying your feelings.
    "When the class was ended
    I walked her to her car
    Everything was so fun
    Everything was so right
    This was the story of
    Love at first sight. "
    ^^Should the first line of this stanza rather be "When the class ended".

    But this is indeed a nice and sweet poem. Short but still filled with enough depth for the reader to be drawn into the world of "Love".
    5/5 from me!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Hey not sure if you remeber me it's stylinsista07 aka Brittany i ahve not written anything for a while but i am back i am starting to write again I have missed it so much i am also looking in to publishing some of my new stuff. I think you were right when you said i would be a famous poet some day I am working on it. I love all of your poems.

    Britt

  • 15 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Arree wahh!! ssoo beautiful..i love the ending of the poem...it just tops the peom.

    :)