Should've Been Writing an Essay

by Taylor   Jun 18, 2008


Somber: the bus-missing days,
Turned imperviously on by the rain,
By the lights; by the thickness of the air-
An elixer on my spoon.
Over our heads:
One fish. Two fish. Red fish..
I wish you still loved me.
Driven insane; counting the days:
One, two, three, four..
Another day more, and I'll be gone.
But you- you'll still be here, moving on,
And that's what bothers me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very unusual style but I like it

    Its kind of like a line from a Dylan song that gets stuck in your head, until one day you say to yourself, oh that's what he was singing about

  • 16 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Excellent poem
    I have read your poem and it touched my heart.Kindly read my poem as well,it is my first poem in this forum,please read it and comment and rank it.Your words are very precious for me.
    Thanks
    Junaid

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