Comments : Another Time

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    I was so intigued with every word of this poem, it was amazing!!

    When does it start, when does it end?
    Does it flow like a river or swirl like wind?

    Love needs no reason, life needs no rhyme
    Time is an illusion, a locked heart is a crime...

    those are my favorite lines, they have so much meaning. a great write! keep up the good work!!