That was a beautiful poem about loss the poem flowed very well and the rhyme was also good what i'm really impressed with though is that you express yourself so well in a language that is not you first language.As for the ending i understand it is not meant to be literal, but what we sometimes wish for .so a resounding well done.

Grant

Awwww.... this a brilliant piece... so touching.. beautifully sad...
each stanza is captivating.. from the starting till the end you held my attention...

"He came to meet his dear beloved
Was used to meet her every day
He knew she loved the scent of tulips
Brought and placed it on her grave."

^^ very hearfelt...
Each line reflects so much emotion.. and Love...

Excellent poem...

keep writing..

Awwhh i liked this. i enjoyyeddd how expressive you were.
i love when people dont hide their feelings and they just put it straight forward.

Wonderful poem. There's so much emotion in it. 5/5

Wow fantastic work i really love this peom its awesome nice job u get a 5/5

Hey! u told me to take a look at ur poems to give comments. so here i am. =)

nice poem. very sad. i could feel the pain of yearning for the one u love but juz cannot meet her.. tat pain is excruciating.. keep up the good work!

OMG that is one expressive and amazing poem!!! Keep up the great writing!
~~Meaghan

You asked me to read and rate it so i have,
and im very glad i did!!!!!!!! 5/5 absolutely beautiful!!
very toughing and tragic, the style, rhythm and flow is great-easy to read but carries alot of meaning and emotion.
beautiful writing, will be reading some more of your work for sure!

Gee...this is beautiful..wonderful effort and emotion!

Thanks for appreciating my poem,your poem is very touching,,,i love this one its similar to my latest poem i hope u can read this one,,take care always

This is good man.... keep writing

Well written & beautifully penned ! 5/5 great poem... You've expressed your feelings in a beautiful loving way...unlike what we usually see in death poems

Really good poem and very emotional.
You're really good at it. Keep it up.

and thanks for coming by and commenting my poem.

-stephanie.