5/5.
i like the poem.It's romantic.and that's what i like to read!!
and thank you for your comments on mii poems.i just happen to write what's going on on paper whenever i need to let things out.

It was good i think... you wrote it well
nice word choice, it something about it that
just didnt hit me were i wanted it to..

i read it and had a little affect but honey
to me it wasnt strong enough... but it was good no lie.. =]

i;ll give you a 4/5

oh and thank you for the comment on my poem....=]

This was really a great write,
I love reading really romantic love poems cos
it gets me thinking of my boyfriend who I
love with all my heart.
I loved your use of words
and thought this poem was really dreamy and romantic.
Keep up the good work,
hope to see more soon
love shell

The time seemed to have frozen,
With you here in my lap
Lets feel the heat of passion,
Before the time here has elapsed

Just minor details:)

I like ur poem 5/5 I think good job

The time seemed to have frozen,
With you here in my laps
Lets feel the heat of passion,
Before the time here is elapsed
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What a passionate stanza. sweet and wonderful
This poem I found very nice I guess I need to read more of yours

I really like this poem..i gave it a 4/5 because i was a little disappointed that it didnt have more to it lol very well done