by 2weak2smile Jun 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I walked through the door, |
by Aussie
What a wild twisted ending. gr8 job:) |
Such a better ending :) I really like the use of description you choose gave a alot of emotion and fear. For eg. The darkness seemed to kill like a disease, Engulfing the eerie forest that I was caged in -AND- The fiery dancers burning my blistered skin to the bone. I could feel the pain happening. Great work! |
by Max Burkert
This is a great poem and kind of sad. |