This is a great poem and kind of sad.

Such a better ending :) I really like the use of description you choose gave a alot of emotion and fear. For eg. The darkness seemed to kill like a disease, Engulfing the eerie forest that I was caged in -AND- The fiery dancers burning my blistered skin to the bone. I could feel the pain happening. Great work!

What a wild twisted ending. gr8 job:)