by Alexis Jun 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She's beautiful. She's thin. |
by Mello193
This is sad....your beautiful! This is a very good poem but very teen angst....good job |
by likethewind
Omg that is so beautiful. its really great. the ugly duckling theme is perfect, very creative. |
by Gness
The ugly duckling ended up to be beautifull in the end sad but beautifully written nice rhyme scheme too |