The ugly duckling ended up to be beautifull in the end sad but beautifully written nice rhyme scheme too

Omg that is so beautiful. its really great. the ugly duckling theme is perfect, very creative.

5/5

keep writing ur really good.

luvs
!~LoRa~i

ps. thanx for ur comment on my poem, it means a lot.

This is sad....your beautiful! This is a very good poem but very teen angst....good job

-hyperbolicmellodramictic