Great imagery i could see exactly what you were talking about. Amazing poem it expresses alot to me personally because i've had relationships like that. I love the rhyme flow, no struggles anywhere throughout. An excellent piece. (5/5)

Flawless descriptions and imagery, such well-expressed thoughts. Your rhyming was right on target as was your flow, which brought the reader straight into this piece. I loved each and every part of this poem, each line so clevar and well thought out. I truly have no suggestions, keep up the awesome work! Take care and God Bless You!

~MaryAnne