by Courageous Dreamer Jun 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
An old box sits on her shelf covered in dust particles, |
by ReinaPuente
5/5 wonderful.. |
This is kinda like a "story-poem" which I'm a big fan of but I'm really bad at it :\ |
Although this reads more for me as a piece of prose instead of poetry, I find it difficult to actually find faults within it, simply because it's so beautiful. It tells a story of love that's been tortured, but is still there. An undying love, if you like. |
by BREEawNUHH
This was amazing. I absolutely loved the emotion you put in it. I like how it's kind of sad, due to a lost love, but it was sweet, at the same time. A beautiful piece. |
by Lonely Rider
Very touching... the emotions attached to the box have been beautifully captured... |