by forevertobeart Jun 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Cruising through sentences |
Cruising through sentences |
Wonderful! It is so refreshing to read poetry with new ways of mixing words, creating imagery, and telling stories. The first stanza was my favorite. The flow was a bit rocky, but it kind of fit the piece in a weird way. Your work is unique and good and I'm off to read more! =J |
by X Harlea X
Nice poem.5/5 |