by Kik Jun 18, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
Blop Blip Blop, |
I love how you started out with like different little noises that one could make. The message of this poem was a bit fuzzy for me, but I think I got the main point from the beginning. Another awesome write where you just right from your mind, and what comes out is what comes out =) It sounds nice. 5/5. |